Fable Child October 14, 2008
Posted by jak in Creative Writing, Life, Poem, Poetry, Writing.trackback
Rascal trail
A frosty way
Rogue directions
Filth and fray
Tussle, fight, screaming sleigh
Salted rags
Unraveled sails
Soaking up
Sweat filled tales
Fuss, bother, worried whales
© 2007 Argonaut
ok seriously how can I add a pic on here so that little blank image of me, faceless and empty, isn’t representing all of my comments to you?? lol
anyways LOVE this one, very very much! Love the images, love the visual, the description,
worried whales..LOVE IT.
I am sure if I wrote about the samd thing, it would be very dark and depressing. You kept this one interestingly lighthearted considering the topic. Maybe the topic is a little unclear…I pictures ice fishermen or those brutes that go to kill the seals…whalers? either way, blood and ice together make for a pretty harsh environment for poetry…
LOVE THIS ONE Jason.