swagger June 28, 2008
Posted by jak in Creative Writing, Life, love, Poem, Poetry, sex, Writing.trackback
there is language in her eyes
gentle movement from a mind
soft thoughts of truth, stirs this just view
and from open hearts will drive
the scarce rhythm of love, an amorous flood
a swagger, a world alive
© 2008 Argonaut
excellent first line,
..a language.. a mind.. open hearts.. stirs the scarce rhythm.. culminating in
a swagger, a world alive. Indeed!
“and from open hearts will drive
the scarce rhythm of love”
It moves so easy and tenderly, short but packed with emotion.
“and from open hearts will drive
the scarce rhythm of love”
It moves so easy and tenderly, short but packed with emotion.
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It moves so easy and tenderly, short but packed with emotion.
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It moves so easy and tenderly, short but packed with emotion.