Go Home Baby Sister December 8, 2007
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Go home baby sister, this boy will do you harm.
The rough edge of yesterday has yet to keep me warm,
My world, so worn.
I look for love. crave it, as human as I know.
But my path trails surely away from faith,
My world, so torn.
Go home baby sister, and see sadness slow.
Let those rough edges dim softly to a blur,
My world, so warm.
© 2007 Argonaut
This poem feels so sad to me. It’s somber, and I think the tone of it is also despondent, laced with a thread of hope.
My heart is heavy…
It’s gorgeous. Linda