Fortunate souls are we October 17, 2007
Posted by jak in Creative Writing, Life, love, Poem, Poetry, Writing.trackback
Thoughts unsaid
Are bleed in red
Fortunate souls are we
We dive into love
As wounded doves
Unafraid of what we see
© 2007 Argonaut
That’s so true. Beautiful. Love is an amazing vulnerable experience.
I love what you did with “bleed in red.” It’s great to read purposeful changes in word usage. Love is like that…
very thoughtful … i like it … esp cos just a few words tell the entire story … all that is needed is thoughtful heart and understanding brains.
cheers!!
Profoundness in such succinctness.
I have to agree.. profound in so few words…
pleased to meet you…
:), I am not sure about being unafraid but I know we dive like we cant help ourselves.
I love this one, really great!
I haven’t been around lately and thought I would drop by. Thanks for the Halloween surprise. I really liked it.
Doesn’t everyone go into love blindly thinking things will be different when they arrive? And, all those words that could have been said but, weren’t. How many relationships would have survived if only they took the time to listen? Thanks for this poem.
Have a nice day.
Michelle