Obsession October 13, 2007
Posted by Jason Keath in Creative Writing, health, Life, love, Poem, Poetry, Writing.trackback
His last breath was one of passion,
One that warmed his core.
His passion led to easy breath
And to easy breath no more.
© 2007 Argonaut
Touching last breath…
and easy breath no more….
grt…
I love the way you opened with this one, powerful.
I like anything with passion in it..:) One last breath, then pluck memory flowers from the air.. welcome death. I like your poignant take on last breath, jason.. gripping
At least his last breath was one of passion. I like the easiness of this piece.
Good Job
Michelle