Entitled Man April 10, 2007
Posted by jak in Creative Writing, Life, Poem, Poetry, Writing.trackback
The roads are rolling quickly tonight
Flowing full of friction and fight
Men mowing down
Any green on the ground
And our children left only with plight
© 2007 Argonaut
This one is like a little embryo of thought for me~ I feel the same way and the middle line stopped me solid. Great middle line…but I was left wanting more. If that was your intent, it worked:)
If you take that middle line all alone and roll it around, its pretty powerful.
I like the first line too…
I love the inspiration behind this one, the heart that tugs a little when you see life mowed down.
Ceeej~
This is great! Thanks for sharing