Simple Directions April 14, 2003
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I see a southern starry night,
She empties seas and creates light.
I feel a northern force beset,
I know his will won’t let me rest.
I see a man come from the west,
He steals my soul, I failed god’s test.
I feel a breeze sent from the east,
She cools my brow and brings me peace.
© 2003 Argonaut
Great thoughts, wonderful flow, lovely write.
I wish you well ~ Jeques
nice.
I simply love this poem, Jason! Especially the first and last couplets. Very powerful images propelled by passion. What a heart find! You cover a lot in few words, and do it justice, my friend..:)